{"version":"1.0","provider_name":"Rainbow Dash Network","provider_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/","type":"link","title":"Brass Bell (brass)'s status on Sunday, 27-May-12 21:38:03 UTC","author_name":"Brass Bell (brass)","author_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/brass","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/1455168","html":"@<span class=\"vcard\"><a href=\"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/14971\" class=\"url\" title=\"Chibi Trotson\"><span class=\"fn nickname\">chibithepony<\/span><\/a><\/span> So, a basic review. The enter key is your friend, a wall of text is your enemy. It will immediately put off your reader. Don't say &quot;5&quot; say &quot;five&quot;.  &quot;rainbow crash&quot; probably needs capitals there are other examples of this elsewhere. I can read again and give some more specific feedback."}