{"version":"1.0","provider_name":"Rainbow Dash Network","provider_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/","type":"link","title":"Crusader 8 (princelypublictimeline)'s status on Tuesday, 28-Aug-12 06:59:45 UTC","author_name":"Crusader 8 (princelypublictimeline)","author_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/princelypublictimeline","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/1859377","html":"@<span class=\"vcard\"><a href=\"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/9434\" class=\"url\" title=\"Jim Kuback\"><span class=\"fn nickname\">abigpony<\/span><\/a><\/span> well I have one, not many. it's legible and not just shoved onto the web without editing, and it conveys personal conflict through showing reactions which characterize (as opposed to just rushing through dialogue without showing how a character responds to hearing something.) I notice a lot of show-don't-tell issues and dialogue which propels plot but not character in the fanfics I try to read."}