{"version":"1.0","provider_name":"Rainbow Dash Network","provider_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/","type":"link","title":"scoot (scoot)'s status on Saturday, 11-May-13 12:47:28 UTC","author_name":"scoot (scoot)","author_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/scoot","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/2596157","html":"@sirnarwhal<\/span><\/a><\/span> 1: The hair suddenly goes thin and then thick again when it leaves the ear, it should be consistent throughout. 2: Your eyes are at different heights, this is bad practice and kind of leaves it looking awkward. 3: The mouth seems to be too far down the face, I drew in some construction lines to try and figure out where I would put it. 4: Her hair seems to be floating to the right of her face when it should actually hug the side of it. 5: Minor gripe, typically anime eyes don't have cuts in them like that, would probably look better without it, personal opinion. 6: I drew in her proper shoulders for you :) http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/attachment\/209103<\/a>"}