{"version":"1.0","provider_name":"Rainbow Dash Network","provider_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/","type":"link","title":"Thomas (twitch)'s status on Monday, 16-Jan-12 05:34:40 UTC","author_name":"Thomas (twitch)","author_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/twitch","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/914275","html":"@<span class=\"vcard\"><a href=\"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/984\" class=\"url\" title=\"pinkamina diane pie\"><span class=\"fn nickname\">theawesomepinkpony<\/span><\/a><\/span> I Just finished watching your latest Brony TV EP. Not bad, I love the Idea, and you can really take this somewhere ... Don't take it the wrong way(don't kill me... please), but touch of constructive Improvement for future EP's (coming from a Brony who had a hell of a time with this in speech class) Take out the ummm,s (I counted 74) and the basically's (60). It will add a lot to the look and sound of the review. also just an idea. As you give the description you can spice it up a bit by inserting some commentary if you like( What you thought about that, how it helped the plot ETC.) The ummm's were just a touch distracting."}