1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Keyvan (astaen) http://rainbowdash.net/astaen http://rainbowdash.net/notice/1298710 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/9384" class="url" title="Ditzy &quot;Derpy&quot; Hooves Esquire"><span class="fn nickname">conventrix</span></a></span> My level in english is too bad, so I can't express my toughts correctly. Even so I ... half-agree with you, considering that I think the story is really well written and, if I was in place of the character, I could not find words to describe my feelings. Also ... &quot;and then this happened and next this happened and after this happened&quot; this is a chronological story, we follow their life, so I can't imagine other way to write it. Again, I don't want to stain my memory of this story, 'cause it changed my life and made me cry like never before ...