1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Brass Bell (brass) http://rainbowdash.net/brass http://rainbowdash.net/notice/1455168 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/14971" class="url" title="Chibi Trotson"><span class="fn nickname">chibithepony</span></a></span> So, a basic review. The enter key is your friend, a wall of text is your enemy. It will immediately put off your reader. Don't say &quot;5&quot; say &quot;five&quot;. &quot;rainbow crash&quot; probably needs capitals there are other examples of this elsewhere. I can read again and give some more specific feedback.