1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Crusader 8 (princelypublictimeline) http://rainbowdash.net/princelypublictimeline http://rainbowdash.net/notice/1480944 Submittied my second chapter to my editor. I wish to give a shout out to @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/9434" class="url" title="Brendan"><span class="fn nickname">abigpony</span></a></span> for giving me honest criticism on what I showed him, and it led me to coming up with much better ideas for a scene than what I wrote.