1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Crusader 8 (princelypublictimeline) http://rainbowdash.net/princelypublictimeline http://rainbowdash.net/notice/1594610 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/8634" class="url" title="christian"><span class="fn nickname">cajunbrony23</span></a></span> we're both green when it comes to writing, but I have a weapon that is helping me: Fire in Fiction. Whenever someone looks at your work and says &quot;oh it's dry&quot; or &quot;not really a page-turner,&quot; this book explains what is in good writing that makes those pages turn in a juicy manner. If you read mine, you'll notice a significant step-up in quality from Chapter 2 to Chapter 3, because Chapter 3 was when I first started reading fire in Fiction. Especially since you're writing an adventure story, you'll get a lot of mileage off of learning how to write tension into narrative. I'm learning all this right now too, so I can't speak much on it myself.