1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Jarrett Voight (jev3) http://rainbowdash.net/jev3 http://rainbowdash.net/notice/194129 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/1529" class="url" title="Cupcakes Nom"><span class="fn nickname">cupcakes</span></a></span> Appreciate the input! Glad you liked the bits about Applebloom and Daisy Cream. I was worried I might have been trying too hard with that. --I'll see what I can do about formatting, it was much more readable in its original document version. --Thanks for the OoC alert for Twilight, I should be able to fix that easily enough. --Probably was kinda lazy with some of the transitions, might be able to tweak some of them. --The &quot;show don't tell stuff&quot; I'll just keep in mind for when I do the next part. --As for the theme song, since the tone is supposed to get lighter later on, I'll hold onto it for a little while and see how it fits into later parts. If it still doesn't work I'll just replace it with a divider.