1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Milo (milo) http://rainbowdash.net/milo http://rainbowdash.net/notice/237723 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/1995" class="url" title="Scott Wolf"><span class="fn nickname">treasurehunter</span></a></span> You spelled extraordinaire wrong on the second page. One the first page, third paragraph, you said be, when its suppose to be &quot;Me&quot; as in you. On third page &quot;coat and mane are&quot; should be &quot;coat and mane is&quot;. Your are also missing another n in &quot;inn&quot; at the end of the third page. I liked the story a lot. Especially the part with ditzy doo. Nice job!