1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ scoot (scoot) http://rainbowdash.net/scoot http://rainbowdash.net/notice/2596157 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/28264" class="url" title="Classified Info Miss"><span class="fn nickname">sirnarwhal</span></a></span> 1: The hair suddenly goes thin and then thick again when it leaves the ear, it should be consistent throughout. 2: Your eyes are at different heights, this is bad practice and kind of leaves it looking awkward. 3: The mouth seems to be too far down the face, I drew in some construction lines to try and figure out where I would put it. 4: Her hair seems to be floating to the right of her face when it should actually hug the side of it. 5: Minor gripe, typically anime eyes don't have cuts in them like that, would probably look better without it, personal opinion. 6: I drew in her proper shoulders for you :) <a href="http://rainbowdash.net/attachment/209103" title="http://rainbowdash.net/file/scoot-20130511T124728-tbss96g.png" class="attachment thumbnail" id="attachment-209103" rel="nofollow external">http://rainbowdash.net/attachment/209103</a>