1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Eddie O'Rourke (floofyhoof) http://rainbowdash.net/floofyhoof http://rainbowdash.net/notice/302635 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/2223" class="url" title="Present Perfect"><span class="fn nickname">presentperfect</span></a></span> Finished. I really like the melancholy stories involving Pinkie, and this one did not disappoint. You conveyed her inner conflict very well, and did a good job of having her resolve it. Have you written anything else? I'd be eager to read it. Also, happy birthday :)