1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ MetalTao (metaltao) http://rainbowdash.net/metaltao http://rainbowdash.net/notice/3486758 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/32832" class="url" title="Victor Chay Vroman"><span class="fn nickname mention">lunaloverchay</span></a></span> OKAY! Goodthing I am here, First off, decide what point of view you want, and introduce Chay as the person talking say something ALLONG the lines of &quot;I am chase, my boring and begrudging day begins with me getting dressed in my ussual attire to begin another dull day of school...&quot; you need to connect what you say to the events in a logical order for this point of view, lists are great, change the &quot;i&quot; to capitals to! :3 You are doing fantastic and I have writers blcok so I can't write things fast as you can! I am jellous to be honets.