1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ MetalTao (metaltao) http://rainbowdash.net/metaltao http://rainbowdash.net/notice/3486807 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/32832" class="url" title="Victor Chay Vroman"><span class="fn nickname mention">lunaloverchay</span></a></span> Now, there are many words you could use to change &quot;Then she walked up to me and ask my name i told her my name.&quot; Now &quot;i told her my name.&quot; Could be changed to say something less redundant, for example! &quot;Then she walked up to me and ask my name, I told her in kind. 'My name is Chay Vroman...'&quot; ELICIT emotions from your words! I am surprised, you seem to learn fast