1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Gherkin ☑️ (thelastgherkin) http://rainbowdash.net/thelastgherkin http://rainbowdash.net/notice/3560150 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/28563" class="url" title="ryanjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjjj"><span class="fn nickname mention">l1ghtsword</span></a></span> Your personal pronouns need capitalisation; try not to use capitals for emphasis when italics are an option; and you could do with a &quot;that&quot; between &quot;saying&quot; and &quot;I have&quot;, or perhaps rephrasing to &quot;I would like it on record that...&quot;