1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Daniel (redtie) http://rainbowdash.net/redtie http://rainbowdash.net/notice/639657 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/3444" class="url" title="Micheal McPony"><span class="fn nickname">thatonepony</span></a></span> just finished listening to the advice and I comepletely get what you mean by trying to sound trusting. Tomorrow i'll do another, better version and try to take in what i have learned from this. Also, considering that lack of male characters in this story and my want to be a part of this project, do you have any pointers for attempting a female voice? or is that something i should forget about for my kind of voice?