1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Kyle Archer Elkin (asvendius) http://rainbowdash.net/asvendius http://rainbowdash.net/notice/768709 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/2118" class="url" title="Jordan Cameron"><span class="fn nickname">tenmihara</span></a></span> Well I really liked the phoenix scene. Between that and the zombie scene it sort of developed Ditzy's character as a pony who thinks and acts fast, only realising the consequences in the aftermath, like in the end of chapter 39/beginning of chapter 40 of Kkat's story. One thing I definitely like about your story in general is compared to the other FoE stories it doesn't go into as much detail about the gore. That stuff was a bit of a deterrent for me when it came to the main story and Project Horizons.