1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ madington flavors (madflavors) http://rainbowdash.net/madflavors http://rainbowdash.net/notice/780541 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/2118" class="url" title="Jordan Cameron"><span class="fn nickname">tenmihara</span></a></span> I thought it was good at managing the skip of time and explaining why, but i had down that it ended kind of abruptly. Also just as a random sidenote im curious as to how you'll tackle her loss of speech....or maybe that's something you'd rather not share. Either way i thought it was good.