1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Insert FakeNameHere (the20percent) http://rainbowdash.net/the20percent http://rainbowdash.net/notice/847936 Hey scribus, can you help me out with a few ideas for my fanfic? I have them on a google doc, can you review them and criticize them, maybe point out a few things that are inconsistent, or that could need improving, or just whatever you feel should be conveyed?