Insert FakeNameHere (the20percent)'s status on Friday, 23-Dec-11 07:22:54 UTC

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    @knoxemerald Righty-o... and btw, I'm reading your fanfic, and it seems good. I have a suggestion to make though. Could you be as descriptive as you were with Twilight entering the spiritual plane in the other events that happen in the story, such as, instead of Twilight running to the library, say something more along the lines of "Twilight saw the side shops and colorful houses pass with a blur, as her legs were carrying her with full force, burdened only with a package that had been delivered to her by Ditzy, a package with the Royal seal of none other than Princess Celestia". Just a hint though

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