Insert FakeNameHere (the20percent)'s status on Friday, 23-Dec-11 07:35:57 UTC
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@knoxemerald and another thing I noticed, is that you may be using the word Twilight too often, when you could use other descriptors such as "the purple mare", something that doesn't explicitly state a subject's name, but rather alluding to it. Its not to say that you should never use Twilight's name, just a little bit of variance can take you a long way.
