{"generator":"StatusNet 1.0.1","title":"Conversation","count":15,"totalItems":15,"items":[{"actor":{"displayName":"Narwhal","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-410-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"410","height":"410"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-96-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-48-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-24-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-96-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"28430"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"narwhal","displayName":"Narwhal","note":"cool","addresses":{"formatted":"I come from a land down under"}}},"content":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> Yeah, I tend to write in first person a lot because lots of my stories are character driven and that lets me stretch out my internal voice, but lots of my favourite authors frequently use the third person perspective. Trying out and experimenting with different styles of writing is a great way to become more comfortable with your storytelling craft.","body":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> Yeah, I tend to write in first person a lot because lots of my stories are character driven and that lets me stretch out my internal voice, but lots of my favourite authors frequently use the third person perspective. Trying out and experimenting with different styles of writing is a great way to become more comfortable with your storytelling craft.","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042885","object":{"displayName":"@spots Yeah, I tend to write in first person a lot because lots of my stories are character driven and that lets me stretch out my internal voice, but lots of my favourite authors frequently use the third person perspective. Trying out and experimenting with different styles of writing is a great way to become more comfortable with your storytelling craft.","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042885","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042885"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042884","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042884"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3452980"},"published":"2015-12-11T00:44:16+00:00","postedTime":"2015-12-11T00:44:16+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@spots Yeah, I tend to write in first person a lot because lots of my stories are character driven and that lets me stretch out my internal voice, but lots of my favourite authors frequently use the third person perspective. Trying out and experimenting with different styles of writing is a great way to become more comfortable with your storytelling craft.","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042885","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4042885","source":"web"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"Hotpotato Butterfingers","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/33282-256-20161111020807.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"256","height":"256"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/33282-96-20161111020807.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/33282-48-20161111020807.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/33282-24-20161111020807.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/33282-96-20161111020807.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"33282"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"spots","displayName":"Hotpotato Butterfingers","note":"pchoo pchoo pchoo","addresses":{"formatted":"heckville"}}},"content":"@noelnarwhal<\/span><\/a><\/span> I've tried out different points of view and I usually go with first person. I think it would be nice to work on my skills in this area as well as with these other areas with the knowledge I've gained since my last time writing","body":"@noelnarwhal<\/span><\/a><\/span> I've tried out different points of view and I usually go with first person. I think it would be nice to work on my skills in this area as well as with these other areas with the knowledge I've gained since my last time writing","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042884","object":{"displayName":"@noelnarwhal I've tried out different points of view and I usually go with first person. I think it would be nice to work on my skills in this area as well as with these other areas with the knowledge I've gained since my last time writing","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042884","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042884"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042879","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042879"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3452980"},"published":"2015-12-11T00:41:18+00:00","postedTime":"2015-12-11T00:41:18+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@noelnarwhal I've tried out different points of view and I usually go with first person. I think it would be nice to work on my skills in this area as well as with these other areas with the knowledge I've gained since my last time writing","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042884","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4042884","source":"web"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"orungano","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/4526","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-38-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"38","height":"38"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-96-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-48-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-24-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-96-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/4526","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"4526"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"tiff","displayName":"orungano","note":"like fingerprints on an abandoned handrail"}},"content":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> that's the ticket","body":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> that's the ticket","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042883","object":{"displayName":"@spots that's the ticket","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042883","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042883"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042882","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042882"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3452980"},"published":"2015-12-11T00:41:17+00:00","postedTime":"2015-12-11T00:41:17+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@spots that's the 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improved","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042882","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4042882","source":"web"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"orungano","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/4526","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-38-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"38","height":"38"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-96-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-48-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-24-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-96-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/4526","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"4526"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"tiff","displayName":"orungano","note":"like fingerprints on an abandoned handrail"}},"content":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> I think anyone would criticise their old work if they revisited it, since people improve all the time, and also we just intrinsically hate everything we've ever done after a while. Just by writing lots and pointing out what you didn't do quite so well, you'll improve exponentionally in a short amount of time","body":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> I think anyone would criticise their old work if they revisited it, since people improve all the time, and also we just intrinsically hate everything we've ever done after a while. Just by writing lots and pointing out what you didn't do quite so well, you'll improve exponentionally in a short amount of time","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042880","object":{"displayName":"@spots I think anyone would criticise their old work if they revisited it, since people improve all the time, and also we just intrinsically hate everything we've ever done after a while. Just by writing lots and pointing out what you didn't do quite so well, you'll improve exponentionally in a short amount of time","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042880","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042880"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042878","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042878"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3452980"},"published":"2015-12-11T00:34:38+00:00","postedTime":"2015-12-11T00:34:38+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@spots I think anyone would criticise their old work if they revisited it, since people improve all the time, and also we just intrinsically hate everything we've ever done after a while. Just by writing lots and pointing out what you didn't do quite so well, you'll improve exponentionally in a short amount of time","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042880","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4042880","source":"web"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"Narwhal","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-410-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"410","height":"410"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-96-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-48-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-24-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-96-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"28430"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"narwhal","displayName":"Narwhal","note":"cool","addresses":{"formatted":"I come from a land down under"}}},"content":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> Yeah, you'll see 3rd person in a lot of world driven works where characters act as disparate forces against one another (Phillip K. 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come from a land down under"}}},"content":"@bowbow<\/span><\/a><\/span> I just like giving advice and helping out when I'm able to. 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It's the least I can do. http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/attachment\/830133","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042874","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4042874","source":"web"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"orungano","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/4526","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-38-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"38","height":"38"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-96-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-48-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-24-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-96-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/4526","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"4526"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"tiff","displayName":"orungano","note":"like fingerprints on an abandoned handrail"}},"content":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> I'd start by compromising setting detail for stuff that will really grab the reader's attention from the start; those two things may or may not coincide. Once they're into the bulk of the story, then it's safer to include the nitty-gritty as and when it becomes relevant","body":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> I'd start by compromising setting detail for stuff that will really grab the reader's attention from the start; those two things may or may not coincide. Once they're into the bulk of the story, then it's safer to include the nitty-gritty as and when it becomes relevant","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042872","object":{"displayName":"@spots I'd start by compromising setting detail for stuff that will really grab the reader's attention from the start; those two things may or may not coincide. Once they're into the bulk of the story, then it's safer to include the nitty-gritty as and when it becomes relevant","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042872","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042872"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042869","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042869"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3452980"},"published":"2015-12-11T00:25:27+00:00","postedTime":"2015-12-11T00:25:27+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@spots I'd start by compromising setting detail for stuff that will really grab the reader's attention from the start; those two things may or may not coincide. Once they're into the bulk of the story, then it's safer to include the nitty-gritty as and when it becomes relevant","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042872","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4042872","source":"web"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"Luna.","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/29817","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/29817-480-20170105022350.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"480","height":"480"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/29817-96-20170105022350.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/29817-48-20170105022350.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/29817-24-20170105022350.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/29817-96-20170105022350.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/29817","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"29817"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"bobo","displayName":"Luna.","note":".","addresses":{"formatted":"Jackson, Michigan"}}},"content":"@noelnarwhal<\/span><\/a><\/span> jesus christ tyler why are you so constructively helpful all of the time<\/i>","body":"@noelnarwhal<\/span><\/a><\/span> jesus christ tyler why are you so constructively helpful all of the time<\/i>","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042870","object":{"displayName":"@noelnarwhal jesus christ tyler why are you so constructively helpful \/all of the time\/","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042870","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042870"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042868","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042868"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3452980"},"published":"2015-12-11T00:20:31+00:00","postedTime":"2015-12-11T00:20:31+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@noelnarwhal jesus christ tyler why are you so constructively helpful \/all of the time\/","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042870","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4042870","source":"web"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"Hotpotato 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pchoo","addresses":{"formatted":"heckville"}}},"content":"@merrytiffmas<\/span><\/a><\/span> In what I'm doing I felt like it'd be best to set the stage, if you will, but it might just be my personal preference to have all the details right away","body":"@merrytiffmas<\/span><\/a><\/span> In what I'm doing I felt like it'd be best to set the stage, if you will, but it might just be my personal preference to have all the details right away","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042869","object":{"displayName":"@merrytiffmas In what I'm doing I felt like it'd be best to set the stage, if you will, but it might just be my personal preference to have all the details right away","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042869","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042869"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/4526","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/4526"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042861","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042861"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3452980"},"published":"2015-12-11T00:19:00+00:00","postedTime":"2015-12-11T00:19:00+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@merrytiffmas In what I'm doing I felt like it'd be best to set the stage, if you will, but it might just be my personal preference to have all the details right away","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042869","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4042869","source":"web"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"Narwhal","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-410-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"410","height":"410"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-96-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-48-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-24-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-96-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"28430"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"narwhal","displayName":"Narwhal","note":"cool","addresses":{"formatted":"I come from a land down under"}}},"content":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> Well, structurally whether it would be an effective choice would likely depend on where you're planning to go from there. Above all else your opening should grab your readers attention, but it should also provide requisite context. What kind of story are you trying to write? Is it in a modern, familiar setting that can be explained through extraneous details as opposed to exposition, or are there idiosyncrasies that make your world unique that need to be told to the reader? And if so, if there a way to show them those details? Your perspective is also important when it comes to relaying details about your characters to an audience. First and third person perspectives don't just change the pronouns, but also have a crucial effect on how the story itself is told (an omniscient narrator will generally be a lot more unbiased whereas seeing the story through a specific character's viewpoint will fundamentally change how the world is seen by the audience.","body":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> Well, structurally whether it would be an effective choice would likely depend on where you're planning to go from there. Above all else your opening should grab your readers attention, but it should also provide requisite context. What kind of story are you trying to write? Is it in a modern, familiar setting that can be explained through extraneous details as opposed to exposition, or are there idiosyncrasies that make your world unique that need to be told to the reader? And if so, if there a way to show them those details? Your perspective is also important when it comes to relaying details about your characters to an audience. First and third person perspectives don't just change the pronouns, but also have a crucial effect on how the story itself is told (an omniscient narrator will generally be a lot more unbiased whereas seeing the story through a specific character's viewpoint will fundamentally change how the world is seen by the audience.","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042868","object":{"displayName":"@spots Well, structurally whether it would be an effective choice would likely depend on where you're planning to go from there. Above all else your opening should grab your readers attention, but it should also provide requisite context. What kind of story are you trying to write? Is it in a modern, familiar setting that can be explained through extraneous details as opposed to exposition, or are there idiosyncrasies that make your world unique that need to be told to the reader? And if so, if there a way to show them those details? Your perspective is also important when it comes to relaying details about your characters to an audience. First and third person perspectives don't just change the pronouns, but also have a crucial effect on how the story itself is told (an omniscient narrator will generally be a lot more unbiased whereas seeing the story through a specific character's viewpoint will fundamentally change how the world is seen by the audience.","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042868","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042868"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042856","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042856"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3452980"},"published":"2015-12-11T00:18:29+00:00","postedTime":"2015-12-11T00:18:29+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@spots Well, structurally whether it would be an effective choice would likely depend on where you're planning to go from there. Above all else your opening should grab your readers attention, but it should also provide requisite context. What kind of story are you trying to write? Is it in a modern, familiar setting that can be explained through extraneous details as opposed to exposition, or are there idiosyncrasies that make your world unique that need to be told to the reader? And if so, if there a way to show them those details? Your perspective is also important when it comes to relaying details about your characters to an audience. First and third person perspectives don't just change the pronouns, but also have a crucial effect on how the story itself is told (an omniscient narrator will generally be a lot more unbiased whereas seeing the story through a specific character's viewpoint will fundamentally change how the world is seen by the audience.","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042868","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4042868","source":"web"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"orungano","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/4526","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-38-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"38","height":"38"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-96-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-48-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-24-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/4526-96-20210321223101.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/4526","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"4526"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"tiff","displayName":"orungano","note":"like fingerprints on an abandoned handrail"}},"content":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> it's hard to say without an actual example. most of the books I have generally start with a place and a year, and describe the initial setting the story begins with, then delves into the specifics when appropriate","body":"@spots<\/span><\/a><\/span> it's hard to say without an actual example. most of the books I have generally start with a place and a year, and describe the initial setting the story begins with, then delves into the specifics when appropriate","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042861","object":{"displayName":"@spots it's hard to say without an actual example. most of the books I have generally start with a place and a year, and describe the initial setting the story begins with, then delves into the specifics when appropriate","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042861","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042861"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042856","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042856"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3452980"},"published":"2015-12-11T00:12:17+00:00","postedTime":"2015-12-11T00:12:17+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@spots it's hard to say without an actual example. most of the books I have generally start with a place and a year, and describe the initial setting the story begins with, then delves into the specifics when appropriate","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042861","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4042861","source":"web"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"Hotpotato Butterfingers","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/33282-256-20161111020807.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"256","height":"256"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/33282-96-20161111020807.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/33282-48-20161111020807.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/33282-24-20161111020807.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/33282-96-20161111020807.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/33282","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"33282"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"spots","displayName":"Hotpotato Butterfingers","note":"pchoo pchoo pchoo","addresses":{"formatted":"heckville"}}},"content":"How do you guys feel about using the first few paragraphs of a story just to create a setting and give some basic character details? Is that like, a bad story structure choice?","body":"How do you guys feel about using the first few paragraphs of a story just to create a setting and give some basic character details? Is that like, a bad story structure choice?","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042856","object":{"displayName":"How do you guys feel about using the first few paragraphs of a story just to create a setting and give some basic character details? Is that like, a bad story structure choice?","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042856","type":"note","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042856"},"context":{"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3452980"},"published":"2015-12-11T00:07:04+00:00","postedTime":"2015-12-11T00:07:04+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"How do you guys feel about using the first few paragraphs of a story just to create a setting and give some basic character details? Is that like, a bad story structure choice?","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4042856","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4042856","source":"web"}}],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3452980","rel":"alternate","type":"text\/html"}]}