{"generator":"StatusNet 1.0.1","title":"Conversation","count":5,"totalItems":5,"items":[{"actor":{"displayName":"Narwhal","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-410-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"410","height":"410"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-96-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-48-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-24-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-96-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"28430"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"narwhal","displayName":"Narwhal","note":"cool","addresses":{"formatted":"I come from a land down under"}}},"content":"@thelastgherkin<\/span><\/a><\/span> Ah, that certainly makes those choices much more understandable in retrospect, and confirms my suspicions in regards to why those details were omitted in the first place. Keep up the good work!","body":"@thelastgherkin<\/span><\/a><\/span> Ah, that certainly makes those choices much more understandable in retrospect, and confirms my suspicions in regards to why those details were omitted in the first place. Keep up the good work!","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071201","object":{"displayName":"@thelastgherkin Ah, that certainly makes those choices much more understandable in retrospect, and confirms my suspicions in regards to why those details were omitted in the first place. Keep up the good work!","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071201","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071201"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/76","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/76"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071195","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071195"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3470802"},"published":"2016-02-01T22:43:33+00:00","postedTime":"2016-02-01T22:43:33+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@thelastgherkin Ah, that certainly makes those choices much more understandable in retrospect, and confirms my suspicions in regards to why those details were omitted in the first place. Keep up the good work!","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071201","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4071201","source":"web"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"Gherkin \u2611\ufe0f","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/76","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/76-480-20191109124925.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"480","height":"480"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/76-96-20191109124926.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/76-48-20191109124926.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/76-24-20191109124926.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/76-96-20191109124926.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/76","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"76"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"thelastgherkin","displayName":"Gherkin \u2611\ufe0f","note":"I love my boyfriend! He is always happy and he plays video games with me. I'm giving him five stars even though he didn't warn me about how many pizzas he requires every day. It's like two pizzas.","addresses":{"formatted":"Airstrip One"},"urls":[{"type":"homepage","value":"http:\/\/thelastgherkin.tumblr.com\/links","primary":"true"}]}},"content":"@northernnarwhal<\/span><\/a><\/span> Great stuff! Scene and staging descriptions were (mostly) deliberate omissions since it was written for Transformers fans and anything more than vague descriptions of which Decepticons are involved would give away bits of humour, the punchline in particular (since one of the few things we actually know about Misfire is that he's never hit a shot in his life, and the rest of the fic was just a really long setup to that line<\/span>). But apart from that, that's some valuable tips if I ever want to start writing for "entry-level" fans. Thanks!","body":"@northernnarwhal<\/span><\/a><\/span> Great stuff! Scene and staging descriptions were (mostly) deliberate omissions since it was written for Transformers fans and anything more than vague descriptions of which Decepticons are involved would give away bits of humour, the punchline in particular (since one of the few things we actually know about Misfire is that he's never hit a shot in his life, and the rest of the fic was just a really long setup to that line<\/span>). But apart from that, that's some valuable tips if I ever want to start writing for "entry-level" fans. Thanks!","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071195","object":{"displayName":"@northernnarwhal Great stuff! Scene and staging descriptions were (mostly) deliberate omissions since it was written for Transformers fans and anything more than vague descriptions of which Decepticons are involved would give away bits of humour, the punchline in particular ([sp]fvapr bar bs gur srj guvatf jr npghnyyl xabj nobhg Zvfsver vf gung ur'f arire uvg n fubg va uvf yvsr, naq gur erfg bs gur svp jnf whfg n ernyyl ybat frghc gb gung yvar[\/sp]). But apart from that, that's some valuable tips if I ever want to start writing for \"entry-level\" fans. Thanks!","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071195","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071195"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071191","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071191"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3470802"},"published":"2016-02-01T22:33:42+00:00","postedTime":"2016-02-01T22:33:42+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@northernnarwhal Great stuff! Scene and staging descriptions were (mostly) deliberate omissions since it was written for Transformers fans and anything more than vague descriptions of which Decepticons are involved would give away bits of humour, the punchline in particular ([sp]fvapr bar bs gur srj guvatf jr npghnyyl xabj nobhg Zvfsver vf gung ur'f arire uvg n fubg va uvf yvsr, naq gur erfg bs gur svp jnf whfg n ernyyl ybat frghc gb gung yvar[\/sp]). But apart from that, that's some valuable tips if I ever want to start writing for \"entry-level\" fans. Thanks!","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071195","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4071195","source":"web"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"Narwhal","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-410-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"410","height":"410"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-96-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-48-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-24-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-96-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"28430"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"narwhal","displayName":"Narwhal","note":"cool","addresses":{"formatted":"I come from a land down under"}}},"content":"@thelastgherkin<\/span><\/a><\/span> That was a fun read! Strong command of tension, well contained, and the dialogue was consistently great. I liked how well you were able to convey the interiority of the various characters in the scene through little quirks in their speech, like how Gyconi's confidence was owning the scene initially but as it progressed that dynamic shifted as you moved from character to character. As a personal criticism (which may just come from my lack of knowledge regarding the source material) I would've liked to have been given a greater understanding as a reader of the space the characters were occupying in the scene. The blocking was present, but the staging was a bit absent, so there was a lot of filling in the blanks in regards to my spatial awareness of the text. Other than that though, I had a great time with it, thanks for sharing!","body":"@thelastgherkin<\/span><\/a><\/span> That was a fun read! Strong command of tension, well contained, and the dialogue was consistently great. I liked how well you were able to convey the interiority of the various characters in the scene through little quirks in their speech, like how Gyconi's confidence was owning the scene initially but as it progressed that dynamic shifted as you moved from character to character. As a personal criticism (which may just come from my lack of knowledge regarding the source material) I would've liked to have been given a greater understanding as a reader of the space the characters were occupying in the scene. The blocking was present, but the staging was a bit absent, so there was a lot of filling in the blanks in regards to my spatial awareness of the text. Other than that though, I had a great time with it, thanks for sharing!","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071191","object":{"displayName":"@thelastgherkin That was a fun read! Strong command of tension, well contained, and the dialogue was consistently great. I liked how well you were able to convey the interiority of the various characters in the scene through little quirks in their speech, like how Gyconi's confidence was owning the scene initially but as it progressed that dynamic shifted as you moved from character to character. As a personal criticism (which may just come from my lack of knowledge regarding the source material) I would've liked to have been given a greater understanding as a reader of the space the characters were occupying in the scene. The blocking was present, but the staging was a bit absent, so there was a lot of filling in the blanks in regards to my spatial awareness of the text. Other than that though, I had a great time with it, thanks for sharing!","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071191","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071191"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/76","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/76"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071177","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071177"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3470802"},"published":"2016-02-01T22:26:05+00:00","postedTime":"2016-02-01T22:26:05+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@thelastgherkin That was a fun read! Strong command of tension, well contained, and the dialogue was consistently great. I liked how well you were able to convey the interiority of the various characters in the scene through little quirks in their speech, like how Gyconi's confidence was owning the scene initially but as it progressed that dynamic shifted as you moved from character to character. As a personal criticism (which may just come from my lack of knowledge regarding the source material) I would've liked to have been given a greater understanding as a reader of the space the characters were occupying in the scene. The blocking was present, but the staging was a bit absent, so there was a lot of filling in the blanks in regards to my spatial awareness of the text. Other than that though, I had a great time with it, thanks for sharing!","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071191","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4071191","source":"MuSTArDroid<\/a>","source_link":"https:\/\/launchpad.net\/mustardroid"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"Narwhal","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-410-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"410","height":"410"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-96-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-48-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-24-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/28430-96-20210317231539.jpeg","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/jpeg","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/28430","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"28430"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"narwhal","displayName":"Narwhal","note":"cool","addresses":{"formatted":"I come from a land down under"}}},"content":"@thelastgherkin<\/span><\/a><\/span> Sweet, reading this now","body":"@thelastgherkin<\/span><\/a><\/span> Sweet, reading this now","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071181","object":{"displayName":"@thelastgherkin Sweet, reading this now","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071181","type":"comment","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071181"},"to":[{"objectType":"person","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/76","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/76"}],"context":{"inReplyTo":{"objectType":"note","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071177","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071177"},"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3470802"},"published":"2016-02-01T22:08:13+00:00","postedTime":"2016-02-01T22:08:13+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"@thelastgherkin Sweet, reading this now","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071181","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4071181","source":"MuSTArDroid<\/a>","source_link":"https:\/\/launchpad.net\/mustardroid"}},{"actor":{"displayName":"Gherkin \u2611\ufe0f","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/76","avatarLinks":[{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/76-480-20191109124925.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"480","height":"480"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/76-96-20191109124926.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"96","height":"96"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/76-48-20191109124926.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"48","height":"48"},{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/76-24-20191109124926.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"24","height":"24"}],"image":{"url":"http:\/\/av.rdn.io\/avatar\/76-96-20191109124926.png","rel":"avatar","type":"image\/png","width":"96","height":"96"},"type":"person","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/76","statusnet:profile_info":{"local_id":"76"},"contact":{"preferredUsername":"thelastgherkin","displayName":"Gherkin \u2611\ufe0f","note":"I love my boyfriend! He is always happy and he plays video games with me. I'm giving him five stars even though he didn't warn me about how many pizzas he requires every day. It's like two pizzas.","addresses":{"formatted":"Airstrip One"},"urls":[{"type":"homepage","value":"http:\/\/thelastgherkin.tumblr.com\/links","primary":"true"}]}},"content":"I finished writing that thing and I think both @northernnarwhal<\/span><\/a><\/span> and @scribus<\/span><\/a><\/span> had a passing interest in it? http:\/\/pny.lv\/06goo<\/a>","body":"I finished writing that thing and I think both @northernnarwhal<\/span><\/a><\/span> and @scribus<\/span><\/a><\/span> had a passing interest in it? http:\/\/pny.lv\/06goo<\/a>","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071177","object":{"displayName":"I finished writing that thing and I think both @northernnarwhal and @scribus had a passing interest in it? http:\/\/pny.lv\/06goo","id":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071177","type":"note","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071177"},"context":{"conversation":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3470802"},"published":"2016-02-01T21:59:24+00:00","postedTime":"2016-02-01T21:59:24+00:00","provider":{"objectType":"service","displayName":"Rainbow Dash Network","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/"},"title":"I finished writing that thing and I think both @northernnarwhal and @scribus had a passing interest in it? http:\/\/pny.lv\/06goo","verb":"post","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/4071177","statusnet:notice_info":{"local_id":"4071177","source":"web"}}],"links":[{"url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/conversation\/3470802","rel":"alternate","type":"text\/html"}]}