{"version":"1.0","provider_name":"Rainbow Dash Network","provider_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/","type":"link","title":"Cyrus Duong (keyreaper)'s status on Monday, 19-Mar-12 18:37:35 UTC","author_name":"Cyrus Duong (keyreaper)","author_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/keyreaper","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/1097748","html":"@<span class=\"vcard\"><a href=\"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/8277\" class=\"url\" title=\"Daniel Oates\"><span class=\"fn nickname\">doates<\/span><\/a><\/span> Just finished you're story if you're still on here. I'm writing up in the comments now. In short I think the story has great potential but was much to quick paced and wreckless. Too much was said and done in 6,000 words without enough detail. This would be a great story if a structure was well built up and chapters had been split up into sections of your revenge. Other than that, I enjoyed the idea of the alternate universe being in your hands to save it."}