{"version":"1.0","provider_name":"Rainbow Dash Network","provider_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/","type":"link","title":"... (tenebarius)'s status on Tuesday, 27-Mar-12 15:44:57 UTC","author_name":"... (tenebarius)","author_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/tenebarius","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/1126050","html":"@<span class=\"vcard\"><a href=\"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/8277\" class=\"url\" title=\"Daniel Oates\"><span class=\"fn nickname\">doates<\/span><\/a><\/span> Here is another hint- Make it more formal. It is too informal, meaning you wouldn't present a scholar with it, would you? I'm not saying make it super up-tight, like a school assignment, but it wouldn't hurt if it were more solemn xD"}