{"version":"1.0","provider_name":"Rainbow Dash Network","provider_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/","type":"link","title":"The white void (hakupony)'s status on Saturday, 02-Jun-12 13:46:05 UTC","author_name":"The white void (hakupony)","author_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/hakupony","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/1481667","html":"@<span class=\"vcard\"><a href=\"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/8634\" class=\"url\" title=\"christian\"><span class=\"fn nickname\">cajunbrony23<\/span><\/a><\/span> &quot;She only loves only\nthere suffering, and their pain.&quot; I think you want to say &quot;their&quot; there.  &quot;she seduces you, making you\nthink she is the only means of living.&quot; That is a very strange pacing. The hard thing about poetry is melody and rythm - and your rythm seems random to me here."}