{"version":"1.0","provider_name":"Rainbow Dash Network","provider_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/","type":"link","title":"MetalTao (metaltao)'s status on Friday, 27-Feb-15 04:53:58 UTC","author_name":"MetalTao (metaltao)","author_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/metaltao","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/3862326","html":"@<span class=\"vcard\"><a href=\"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/34172\" class=\"url\" title=\"Dib Membrane\"><span class=\"fn nickname mention\">dibmembrane<\/span><\/a><\/span> I have a complaint, the flow from powers to grandparents is a bit on the Wonky side, ideas need to flow from one to the other. You see, you mentioned two things in te first sentence, Explain one at a time, and, explain them chronologically. <br \/>You went from, &quot;I have powers!&quot; And Then wen, &quot;I live with my grandparents.&quot; And explained the grandparents lives witjout explaining what came first, the powers."}