{"version":"1.0","provider_name":"Rainbow Dash Network","provider_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/","type":"link","title":"Jordan Cameron (tenmihara)'s status on Monday, 26-Sep-11 05:59:03 UTC","author_name":"Jordan Cameron (tenmihara)","author_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/tenmihara","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/551174","html":"@<span class=\"vcard\"><a href=\"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/3726\" class=\"url\" title=\"Joey Hurst\"><span class=\"fn nickname\">knoxemerald<\/span><\/a><\/span> So, first thing I'm noticing is that you do something I've been called out on for a few times before. You tend to repeat the same words (excluding things like 'it', 'the' and 'a') within the same phrases. For example, this sentence: &quot;The quiet atmosphere of the library was abruptly and temporarily destroyed by Twilight's hasty entrance (into the library)&quot; The part I put in brackets is somewhat redundant, as you already established that Twilight was entering the library"}