{"version":"1.0","provider_name":"Rainbow Dash Network","provider_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/","type":"link","title":"Daniel (redtie)'s status on Wednesday, 19-Oct-11 04:09:21 UTC","author_name":"Daniel (redtie)","author_url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/redtie","url":"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/notice\/643514","html":"@<span class=\"vcard\"><a href=\"http:\/\/rainbowdash.net\/user\/2495\" class=\"url\" title=\"Tequila Sunrise\"><span class=\"fn nickname\">tequilasunrise<\/span><\/a><\/span> Also about your fanfic. Its got an issue called &quot;talking heads&quot;. (don't worry everyone deals with that problem. I used to do it all the time) Basically when you have a scene with two characters talking...and its all they do really. A suggestion would be to try and show aspects of a characters personality or intention without the character speaking. &quot;Show, don't tell&quot;"}