1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ ... (tenebarius) http://rainbowdash.net/tenebarius http://rainbowdash.net/notice/1126050 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/8277" class="url" title="Daniel Oates"><span class="fn nickname">doates</span></a></span> Here is another hint- Make it more formal. It is too informal, meaning you wouldn't present a scholar with it, would you? I'm not saying make it super up-tight, like a school assignment, but it wouldn't hurt if it were more solemn xD