1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ The white void (hakupony) http://rainbowdash.net/hakupony http://rainbowdash.net/notice/1481688 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/8634" class="url" title="christian"><span class="fn nickname">cajunbrony23</span></a></span> To make things short: &quot;Sadness&quot; seems more like &quot;the femme fatale&quot; to me. I could not feel how much her actions hurt. Also, you don't seem to use the medium at it's full potential. Now to the good things: I like how you left open if you are talking about an actual woman or just the anthromorpication of sadness.