1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ The white void (hakupony) http://rainbowdash.net/hakupony http://rainbowdash.net/notice/1481713 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/8634" class="url" title="christian"><span class="fn nickname">cajunbrony23</span></a></span> I guess, &quot;monters&quot; is a typo. &quot;I am not what they are. They hate and scorn me for it&quot; You start every line with &quot;they&quot; - except the last one. This makes the last sentence to seem wrong. It feels like it was a lie or sarcasm. &quot;And as they stand there laugh at me&quot; why not laughing? &quot;for what I choose to be&quot; A very strong expression. I like that. &quot;They mock me.&quot; You already established a strong picture which told just that. In addition, if you cut that sentence, you woul have room to rearrange where the lines end. &quot;And I have no choice but to sit and watch.&quot; One thing to you personally: you always have a choice. But it is an impressive picture you use here.