1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ NewPatrol (newpatrol) http://rainbowdash.net/newpatrol http://rainbowdash.net/notice/1575252 ok ill resay, it, Its SUPER good, i like the ditzy/daring doo sister connection, good characters, vary your adjectives more, and you spel daring wrong once in the prologue, otherwise, rather incredible fanfic :D