1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ delete_ (remove) http://rainbowdash.net/remove http://rainbowdash.net/notice/189559 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/1838" class="url" title="Bobby Hill"><span class="fn nickname">violetstyle</span></a></span> It's a bit hard to follow, so I'm guessing it's meant to be kinda random? But it never really settled into a flow to read for me. Also, it didn't seem to have a great deal to do with #<span class="tag"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/tag/mlpfim" rel="tag">MLPFiM</a></span> until towards the end, but by then, it seemed to only be so in passing, with namedropping Equestria and Trixie. I'm not saying it's objectively bad, but it's certainly not my average taste, and I'm uncertain of what the goal of the fic is.