1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Rarity (rarity) http://rainbowdash.net/rarity http://rainbowdash.net/notice/2497649 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/7912" class="url" title="Cooper Quick"><span class="fn nickname">bronyleaf</span></a></span> 3 things. The first is that you need to get a better microphone, or get a breath blocker thing so we cant hear your lips. The second is that you need to make sure that your vocals are in sync with the instrumental. Third, make the guitar more audible. Your voice and guitar playing in and of themselves aren't bad.