1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Pony (pony) http://rainbowdash.net/pony http://rainbowdash.net/notice/2526682 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/1768" class="url" title="Lelouch I mangoes"><span class="fn nickname">snowlynx</span></a></span> I wouldn't worry about making it better really. but yeah it's obviously really excerpt length and not story length. You could give it an intro and set up the reasons for Rarity wanting to start a relationship, etc.