1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ adiwan (adiwan) http://rainbowdash.net/adiwan http://rainbowdash.net/notice/2756830 Can someone look at the text and tell me if there are any mistakes? <a href="http://pastebin.com/M5pE2jQW" title="http://pastebin.com/M5pE2jQW" rel="nofollow external">http://pastebin.com/M5pE2jQW</a> English isn't my native language so I want to be 100 % sure everything sounds fine.