1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Chris Bell (mrdragon) http://rainbowdash.net/mrdragon http://rainbowdash.net/notice/288951 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/1188" class="url" title="Samuel Narramore"><span class="fn nickname">sarramore</span></a></span> It's a good read, but I think you need to look at maybe putting in some more detail about events. It's kind of jumpy in places as well, maybe focus a little more on the smaller fine details. Just my two cents :)