1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ MetalTao (metaltao) http://rainbowdash.net/metaltao http://rainbowdash.net/notice/3862326 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/34172" class="url" title="Dib Membrane"><span class="fn nickname mention">dibmembrane</span></a></span> I have a complaint, the flow from powers to grandparents is a bit on the Wonky side, ideas need to flow from one to the other. You see, you mentioned two things in te first sentence, Explain one at a time, and, explain them chronologically. <br />You went from, &quot;I have powers!&quot; And Then wen, &quot;I live with my grandparents.&quot; And explained the grandparents lives witjout explaining what came first, the powers.