1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ scoot (scoot) http://rainbowdash.net/scoot http://rainbowdash.net/notice/3990931 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/17847" class="url" title="Mattimation"><span class="fn nickname mention">mrmattimation</span></a></span> I went over it in red, hope that's fine. The main thing I noticed is ear placement, which is easy to get right when you know that ears are always in line with the eyes. I also tried to identify facial structure problems, which were really only prominent in the side-view. I hope this helps in some small way. (Also women don't usually have big wide shoulders like that so I gave her a more flattering one) <a href="http://pny.lv/qhsh" title="http://fi.rdn.io/file/scoot-20150923T015102-4lkjs9w.png" class="attachment thumbnail" id="attachment-827443" rel="nofollow external">http://pny.lv/qhsh</a>