1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Narwhal (narwhal) http://rainbowdash.net/narwhal http://rainbowdash.net/notice/4093820 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/1975" class="url" title="scoot"><span class="fn nickname mention">scoot</span></a></span> Ah, that's understandable. In which case, the only critique I can think of at the moment would be that it would probably make more visual sense if this shot <a href="http://i.imgur.com/UBAZeAC.png" title="http://i.imgur.com/UBAZeAC.png" class="attachment" id="attachment-833714" rel="nofollow external">http://i.imgur.com/UBAZeAC.png</a> had some kind of signifier of the main character in the house, so when you cut to this shot afterwards <a href="http://i.imgur.com/YgzQlJW.png" title="http://i.imgur.com/YgzQlJW.png" class="attachment" id="attachment-833715" rel="nofollow external">http://i.imgur.com/YgzQlJW.png</a> the viewer isn't wondering where they came from.