1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Milo (milo) http://rainbowdash.net/milo http://rainbowdash.net/notice/414030 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/3023" class="url"><span class="fn nickname">kaijinzero</span></a></span> Sorry, Didn't see your pm, I edit it a bit. You should avoid using 'thing' to describe something, and use synonyms like specimen, and etc. It's not bad. I can judge it beyond this point, but it's looking to have a promising future.