1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Daniel (redtie) http://rainbowdash.net/redtie http://rainbowdash.net/notice/643514 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/2495" class="url" title="Tequila Sunrise"><span class="fn nickname">tequilasunrise</span></a></span> Also about your fanfic. Its got an issue called &quot;talking heads&quot;. (don't worry everyone deals with that problem. I used to do it all the time) Basically when you have a scene with two characters talking...and its all they do really. A suggestion would be to try and show aspects of a characters personality or intention without the character speaking. &quot;Show, don't tell&quot;