1.0 link Rainbow Dash Network http://rainbowdash.net/ Weenie Wanga Langa Genghis Khan (flaxx) http://rainbowdash.net/flaxx http://rainbowdash.net/notice/97434 @<span class="vcard"><a href="http://rainbowdash.net/user/1256" class="url" title="M"><span class="fn nickname">amadman</span></a></span> There, finished reading it. I liked it, especially the beginning, it was touching. However, the grammar might need some work. You know, capital letters, commas and so on. Otherwise it good. I did notice that you repeated &quot;It was near midnight in Equestria&quot; three times at the very beginning, though.