MetalTao (metaltao)'s status on Saturday, 11-Oct-14 18:22:11 UTC

  1. Ok, so, I am writing a story, it is moving a long quite smoothly. But I wanted to share this passage with you, I am rather proud of it!
    "Under the darkened and deciduous night sky came the bombardment of heavy spheres of water and ice, slashing the bark and flaying small chips of leafs into the muddied road beneath where a large squad of soldiers were filled searching with bright flood lights from their flared horns. They seemed to be looking a bit desperately, shouting into the night by way of name. The most notable of these was a yellow Pegasus, she was leading the front and scouring the trees with bright brown eyes showing much ferocity as her vision was delving into the tree line in search of some one or something."

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