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  1. RedEnchilada (notice the lack of a space) RedEnchilada (notice the lack of a space)

    For the record this is what I have written: http://pastebin.com/SM5KQxZM I need practice writing, it seems.

    Monday, 16-Jan-12 15:14:00 UTC from web
    1. Michael Michael

      @redenchilada For the idea to work though, it'd need to be more of a "I want this whole hiking thing to be done properly and by the book, I will NOT leave...even if I miss my f-friends *sniff*" that, or it'd need to be a realization that talking to her friends is probably the better idea instead of sitting here in the wilderness being stubborn trying to figure it out herself using the given beginning in that link. Admittedly though, the whole dream thing seems a bit forced to me.

      Monday, 16-Jan-12 15:20:02 UTC from web
      1. RedEnchilada (notice the lack of a space) RedEnchilada (notice the lack of a space)

        @pumpkinhill And I think that's my main problem. The dream is the whole basis of the story, and yet I can't incorporate it properly. I'm probably better off redoing the whole thing, honestly.

        Monday, 16-Jan-12 15:22:36 UTC from web
        1. Michael Michael

          @redenchilada Well how you can work around things depends on what you want to keep. The dream as a basis, or the lesson learned about her friends?

          Monday, 16-Jan-12 15:26:11 UTC from web