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  1. Ellis Ellis

    This look alright? Can't help but think there's something a bit wrong with it. I think it's the back. It looks too... bare... or too straight or something. http://ur1.ca/9ilpk

    Sunday, 17-Jun-12 00:50:36 UTC from web
    1. RedEnchilada (notice the lack of a space) RedEnchilada (notice the lack of a space)

      @ecmc The back is too straight, yeh. Actually, the neck as a whole looks like it comes too far back. I've found that where the ear connects to the head should also be where the neck connects, so try pulling that in a bit. (I can redline what I'm talking about if that would help, but I've found it to be rude when one does so without asking first, so. :c)

      Sunday, 17-Jun-12 00:54:08 UTC from web
    2. Bit Shift Bit Shift

      @ecmc Yeah, I'd say it's the back. *Truly* straight lines, in drawings of anything living, are usually bad, and this is no exception. With that one caveat, though, it certainly looks good. :)

      Sunday, 17-Jun-12 00:54:43 UTC from web
    3. Ellis Ellis

      @greydragon412 @redenchilada @bitshift Thank you guys. Advice taken! Made it a bit more curved, sketched the whole line up to the ear to make sure it lined up... I think it looks a bit better? http://ur1.ca/9ilve

      Sunday, 17-Jun-12 01:07:06 UTC from web
      1. Bit Shift Bit Shift

        @ecmc Looks good to me. :)

        Sunday, 17-Jun-12 01:07:42 UTC from web
    4. Ellis Ellis

      @greydragon412 @bitshift Yay ^.^

      Sunday, 17-Jun-12 01:10:51 UTC from web
    5. Ellis Ellis

      @greydragon412 Finally making a proper design for my OC.

      Sunday, 17-Jun-12 01:14:20 UTC from web