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@pyravia Well making the reader the victim is sorta just strange, and doesn't exactly help paint the picture, but when it's someone ELSE you're like, "Hhmm, SUCKS FOR THAT PERSON!" Then you get interested how they'll react and you could actually make a character that has their own distinct personally, which you could bring to life in the story, making it epic. I mean, we all read the standard: "Hey, where am I!" And then a knife out of nowhere, stabbing you in the back, making you struggle and squirm with the sharp knife toying with your nerves. But what if you made it unique? Like THIS: Greg was always a kid who always thought himself higher than the rest, but that all changed when he found himself on a cold, hard metal table, all his senses were already fading away, and he hasn't even has a clue about what's going on, "W-W-W-WHERE AM I?" He cried, as dark figure emerged from the depths of the shadows, "Doesn't matter, Greg. Because you're going to die here. And no one will care."
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@pyravia was it fun
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@pyravia why would you go diving in windy and rainy weather
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@pyravia you have guts to do that
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@pyravia still you have guts my friend
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@pyravia Not a swimming pool with tons of chemicals= Too dirty for me ALSO FISH. FISH EWWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEWEW
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@pyravia I am scared now just to let you know
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@pyravia Well right off the back, using me, the reader as the victim is sorta weird considering I'm reading it and you're putting words in my mouth which some people wouldn't say so I would have made a random victim but w/e
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@pyravia Well I would rather have more defined, personal dialogue than the standard, "Who what where why and PLEASE NO."
