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  1. cabal cabal

    The Cabal has arrived.

    Monday, 04-Apr-11 23:23:56 UTC from web
    1. Gabe Canter Gabe Canter

      @snowlynx OH MY GOD

      Monday, 15-Apr-13 11:47:29 UTC from web
    2. Pony Pony

      @snowlynx what's the name of that fic?

      Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:10:45 UTC from web
    3. Pony Pony

      @snowlynx o.o you did? nice!

      Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:29:55 UTC from web
    4. Pony Pony

      @snowlynx what makes you say it's not good enough?

      Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:32:48 UTC from web
    5. Pony Pony

      @snowlynx For it to be that good you'd have to build up to it. What you have so far is good for just that. It's on track to being great.

      Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:35:02 UTC from web
    6. Pony Pony

      @snowlynx I wouldn't worry about making it better really. but yeah it's obviously really excerpt length and not story length. You could give it an intro and set up the reasons for Rarity wanting to start a relationship, etc.

      Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:38:56 UTC from web
    7. Pony Pony

      @snowlynx there are lots of ways to make it longer though.. that's just one

      Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:39:42 UTC from web
    8. Pony Pony

      @snowlynx That's as good a method as any imo!

      Monday, 15-Apr-13 12:53:51 UTC from web