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  1. Eris Eris

    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1jCZLMYq5l1wRnxbg7YZ4AJ8wMHy6RvRnRdCKqFyL2Zc/edit?usp=sharing Here. Be a critic. I started from where I had the most ideas, and I'll add to the beginning and the end of the document as I feel like it.

    Friday, 25-Oct-13 14:08:39 UTC from web
    1. Colby Colby

      @coffeecream I think it's a very interesting story. You're a good writer! But now I'm going to be in suspense until you finish it...

      Friday, 25-Oct-13 14:18:50 UTC from web
    2. Chris Rotolo Chris Rotolo

      @coffeecream I just finished and Im a bit confused. However it's a great story lots of detail, but can you explain a bit about what's going on?

      Friday, 25-Oct-13 14:20:51 UTC from web
    3. William William

      @coffeecream brilliant. You kept me wondering through it and i still wonder. Great suspense. Write more when you can, please! (Plus the lyra cameo almost made me squee aloud)

      Friday, 25-Oct-13 14:39:57 UTC from web
    4. Chris Rotolo Chris Rotolo

      @coffeecream I read it again. It's very good. I would like to read on.

      Friday, 25-Oct-13 14:43:39 UTC from web